08-03-2025, 11:23 PM
I take your point at this might sound a little cold but I would contend that that is necessary within the context of the poem. Structure and language are very important to me, so thank you for that anyway.
This poem is very personal to me and is essentially about me, as is all my work; in fact I think that might be a bit of a failing as I’m not really able to write affectively about anything else. I guess that may not come across very well in this one.
This poem is very personal to me and is essentially about me, as is all my work; in fact I think that might be a bit of a failing as I’m not really able to write affectively about anything else. I guess that may not come across very well in this one.