Annals from the patio:

[EmperorPenguin]

That was a good read and I personally enjoyed it. I had this nice little bee bopping thing going on in my head with your last stanza. I will need to figure out the time signature, tempo, and note type used to tell you, but it sounded pretty sweet in my head.

I do apologize if my critique is weak, but this is the first time I've read someone else's poetry since I took creative writing.