A Bridge of Words
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So, I haven't modified any of the wording yet, but it definitely hits harder. I took what I removed and read it, and it made no sense and didn't fit the flow and tone, I appreciate both of your responses. The stanza does feel a little bit weird, but it's something I can work with and improve.

And for rowens, I can at least confirm that I am not the same person (at least what this scrambled brain remembers), but very funny that someone else went by Penguin.
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A Bridge of Words - by EmperorPenguin - 09-09-2025, 03:37 AM
RE: A Bridge of Words - by rowens - 09-09-2025, 05:25 AM
RE: A Bridge of Words - by JackTredden - 09-09-2025, 07:37 PM
RE: A Bridge of Words - by EmperorPenguin - 09-10-2025, 07:56 AM
RE: A Bridge of Words - by Jane Doe - 09-10-2025, 10:36 AM
RE: A Bridge of Words - by tun - 09-10-2025, 02:12 PM
RE: A Bridge of Words - by Joooonaaaa - 09-10-2025, 07:39 PM
RE: A Bridge of Words - by Jane Doe - 09-11-2025, 07:47 AM



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