09-10-2025, 07:56 AM
So, I haven't modified any of the wording yet, but it definitely hits harder. I took what I removed and read it, and it made no sense and didn't fit the flow and tone, I appreciate both of your responses. The stanza does feel a little bit weird, but it's something I can work with and improve.
And for rowens, I can at least confirm that I am not the same person (at least what this scrambled brain remembers), but very funny that someone else went by Penguin.
And for rowens, I can at least confirm that I am not the same person (at least what this scrambled brain remembers), but very funny that someone else went by Penguin.
