A Bridge of Words

[Joooonaaaa]

I really like how emotional this poem is. But I have to agree with the replies above, I think your poem would be better off without rhymes. The content of your poem is setting this dark image and yet the rhymes give the feeling of making everything seem light. It may guide you towards words that don’t exactly mean what you are trying to convey, yet you choose them to complete the rhyme you started.