“…and called it love

[rowens]

Even the verbs feel like nouns, and everything feels static, moving rhythmically with starts and stops, but never quite falsestarts, and never feeling like anything is going anywhere despite all the different things happening and being experienced. Which is a positive achievement rather than this meant as a negative critique.
The stylization is effective. Nothing really stands out, so other things could as well be described, but that's not what drives the poem, so what is described and how it's said is fine.
While it could be better, it doesn't need to be is what I see.