09-13-2025, 07:29 AM
As with your other poem, your stylization: long and short sentences winding through stanzas is effective. As are your shifts from and returns to subjects and details.
That's pretty much all poems, but yours draw appropriate attention to that stylization with an effectively appropriate tone.
I don't need to describe, as you either are aware and skilled at it, or you are doing it spontaneously which is all for the good.
That's pretty much all poems, but yours draw appropriate attention to that stylization with an effectively appropriate tone.
I don't need to describe, as you either are aware and skilled at it, or you are doing it spontaneously which is all for the good.