09-19-2025, 03:24 AM
This poem should be expanded a few more stanzas, to enhance clarity. Over though, its a compelling piece about the emptiness we find within ourselves.
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-Bryn
A gentle reminder that this is insufficient critique, even for Basic forum. Also, the rules indicate that one must offer critique in the forum they wish to post. Please review the guidelines.
-Bryn
You Spend To Much Time On Being Right