09-20-2025, 01:14 PM
lovely i love it, perhaps remove the last line i think it contrasts a lot from the rest of the rhythm of your poem. It's beautiful, though.
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Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 03:35 AM
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RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by shady - 09-20-2025, 01:14 PM
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