Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See

Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See

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09-20-2025, 01:56 PM

Wow. Now you totally make sense Tun. But how do I add real human experiences when I am someone who experieced some of the things expressed in this poem. Thanks for elaborating on your point, I will definitely take it into account when revising this poem.

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Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by Deor Ana Log - 09-19-2025, 03:46 AM

RE: Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by tun - 09-20-2025, 12:22 AM

RE: Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 01:56 PM

RE: Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by JackTredden - 09-20-2025, 08:02 PM

RE: Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by Deor Ana Log - 09-21-2025, 04:18 AM

RE: Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by JackTredden - 09-21-2025, 07:47 PM

RE: Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by Deor Ana Log - 09-25-2025, 12:56 AM

RE: Fish,Bowl,Back,To,See - by Deor Ana Log - 09-25-2025, 05:19 AM

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