Leave Like You Be

[tun]

 

Not sure how to respond to this? Yes I do make my poems with the intention for them not sound gross. I simply disagree with you that it sounds ugly even though not all of the words do not rhyme exactly. I don't think that it would be worse off if it is did sound ugly, because as you have continually reiterated poetry comes from the subconscious and can't be edited or it will lose it's meaning. Thank you for spending time on my poems, but I don't think you reading them with the intention of like an part of what I write.

You have set up a strawman and iced it with a sentence that is not even readable. You are pretending not to know what I am saying. Why would you do that?