Insecurity

[yourlocalaliyen]

I really like the theme of this poem. My advice would be to play with structure I feel like some readers will have a hard time with finding the flow within this structure. Also I'd suggest messing with your delivery. It's could be a bit more concise with less reputation. It might make your points more powerful.

Anywho thanks for the read

Thank you so very much! I'll do my best to implement your advice!