10-10-2025, 12:45 AM
You could make the period a question mark, or you could leave it as a period. That would also work if you played with the plural eyes sometimes and singular, they knows. Awkwardness pay the bills.
Gift
Janus-faced, an October burden,
free as breeze and tilted
sun bury the possibility like,
but not as, a stone.
We offer together
what I do alone;
cabinets and darkness
stir a rival no less
me than thee.
Every Thing sings of her
without knowing.
I am wrong,
but so is everyone, so why a stone and not a pack of peanut butter M&M's?
I hear she likes them.
Gift
Janus-faced, an October burden,
free as breeze and tilted
sun bury the possibility like,
but not as, a stone.
We offer together
what I do alone;
cabinets and darkness
stir a rival no less
me than thee.
Every Thing sings of her
without knowing.
I am wrong,
but so is everyone, so why a stone and not a pack of peanut butter M&M's?
I hear she likes them.

