A Double's Thread
#3
You could make the period a question mark, or you could leave it as a period. That would also work if you played with the plural eyes sometimes and singular, they knows. Awkwardness pay the bills.

Gift

Janus-faced, an October burden,
free as breeze and tilted
sun bury the possibility like,
but not as, a stone.

We offer together
what I do alone;

cabinets and darkness
stir a rival no less
me than thee.

Every Thing sings of her
without knowing.

I am wrong,

but so is everyone, so why a stone and not a pack of peanut butter M&M's?
I hear she likes them.
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A Double's Thread - by rowens - 10-09-2025, 11:43 PM
RE: A Double's Thread - by tun - 10-10-2025, 12:33 AM
RE: A Double's Thread - by rowens - 10-10-2025, 12:45 AM



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