10-21-2025, 06:53 AM
(10-20-2025, 09:34 PM)rowens Wrote: Maybe: Are we not just children playing with toys? ?Thank you for taking the time to read this and leave this review. I appreciate your feedback and your suggestion is very fluid and adds a smoother finish. Thank you for that.
Or keep 'our', although the 'our' in "our little joys" already hints at it. That comes down to nuance of meaning and feeling.
Simply: Are we not just children playing with toys? is smoother.
Move within,
but don’t move the way fear makes you move.
-Rumi
but don’t move the way fear makes you move.
-Rumi