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I really enjoy this one. The subject is identifiable, the use of rhyming is varied, which always keeps you on your toes, and most of all it felt so real. And I feel something reading it!

I wish I could be this clever. ^^
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body - by shady - 10-01-2025, 10:44 PM
RE: beautiful - by awv-fitzy - 10-02-2025, 10:36 AM
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