Cutting the grass
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(Yesterday, 03:35 AM)Bunx Wrote:  I feel like I could write a rage poem about starting up my lawnmower each year.

I do like the effect tone of the poem quite a bit its almost musical.

"Row by row'
"I've found a steady rhythm now"

It was a fun read, thanks!
Thank you, Bunx.

(Yesterday, 03:41 AM)Deor Ana Log Wrote:  I love the reveal of the cut grass, so much that I think it might be better to not have it in the title. That was the delightful surprise can be ramped up. Also, I love how each stanza has one less line; a very fitting form factor. Thanks for sharing - Deor Ana Log
Thank you, Deor Ana Log. 

I hadn't intended "Cutting the grass" to be the title of the poem, just the title of the thread. Still finding out how things work around here.
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Messages In This Thread
Cutting the grass - by JohnS - 04-16-2026, 09:34 PM
RE: Cutting the grass - by dukealien - 04-16-2026, 09:55 PM
RE: Cutting the grass - by JohnS - 04-16-2026, 11:35 PM
RE: Cutting the grass - by Bunx - Yesterday, 03:35 AM
RE: Cutting the grass - by JohnS - 4 hours ago
RE: Cutting the grass - by Deor Ana Log - Yesterday, 03:41 AM



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