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(Yesterday, 03:35 AM)Bunx Wrote: I feel like I could write a rage poem about starting up my lawnmower each year.Thank you, Bunx.
I do like the effect tone of the poem quite a bit its almost musical.
"Row by row'
"I've found a steady rhythm now"
It was a fun read, thanks!
(Yesterday, 03:41 AM)Deor Ana Log Wrote: I love the reveal of the cut grass, so much that I think it might be better to not have it in the title. That was the delightful surprise can be ramped up. Also, I love how each stanza has one less line; a very fitting form factor. Thanks for sharing - Deor Ana LogThank you, Deor Ana Log.
I hadn't intended "Cutting the grass" to be the title of the poem, just the title of the thread. Still finding out how things work around here.

