Enough

[Bruce V]

Thanks for the insights into this little poem. I recognize there is a lot of color reference here, perhaps too much. I was trying to convey the experience as it happened....the overwhelming awareness of light and sound. As for the repetition of the last line: I was always struck by Frost's lines, "And miles to go before I sleep/ And miles to go before I sleep". It seems to evoke an almost dreamy feeling, and I was moved to try it here. Still, I am happy to hear other perspectives....always welcome.