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(05-09-2026, 07:32 PM)Smiley Wrote:  And hm, please and release, I thought it rhymed.
Please ends with a softer s than release.

Also, I'll add that the poem is written in an extremely uninspired and thoughtless way for such a sensitive and intimate topic. The cheap rhyme scheme makes its statements come off as insincere. It's devoid of the care it proclaims to have, even down to its choice of verbs, e.g. "you WILL be at ease." Please give the topic a little more thought.
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Sex - by Smiley - 05-09-2026, 08:10 AM
RE: Sex - by Magpie - 05-09-2026, 02:32 PM
RE: Sex - by RiverNotch - 05-09-2026, 03:09 PM
RE: Sex - by Smiley - 05-09-2026, 07:32 PM
RE: Sex - by alonso ramoran - 05-10-2026, 07:55 AM
RE: Sex - by Magpie - 05-10-2026, 06:27 PM
RE: Sex - by Bruce V - 05-10-2026, 05:41 AM
RE: Sex - by wasellajam - 05-10-2026, 05:45 AM
RE: Sex - by milo - 05-10-2026, 06:17 AM
RE: Sex - by Smiley - 05-10-2026, 09:34 PM
RE: Sex - by wasellajam - 05-10-2026, 10:20 PM



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