Sex

[wasellajam]

Is it a delicate subject or just a shitty poem?

No subject is out of bounds to write about.

So for me it fails so badly for its simple, dull and predator-like attitude towards a complex subject.

As to poem quality, this is at the same level as when you first joined. This site is full of teaching threads so it seems you have no desire to move forward, a lost opportunity for you. Rhyming lines do not make a poem, which you would know by now if you were reading the site.

My personal answer to your question.