Post Lightning
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Very evocative. The confusion and hope aren't equally mixed, but both are there.

Tiny suggestion: I think it should be

compassion's

rather than without the apostrophe. But recognizing that adding an apostrophe by phone is unreasonably difficult if it's not offered by Otto Korrekt, no reason to change, really. It adds to the atmosphere of disorganization without desperation.
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Post Lightning - by Bunx - 05-11-2026, 04:35 AM
RE: Post Lightning - by dukealien - 05-11-2026, 05:33 AM
RE: Post Lightning - by Bunx - 05-11-2026, 05:53 AM
RE: Post Lightning - by wasellajam - 05-11-2026, 06:00 AM
RE: Post Lightning - by Bunx - 05-11-2026, 06:25 AM



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