Whale Fall
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L1 might be completely disposed of,
L2 might be broken in two,
L4 might receive a verb,
and L5 might be connected with a colon or em dash:

Sculpin and mollusk
devour soft tissue,
snot worms colonize bone,
urchins form a phalanx:
in my garden, spiderwort blooms.
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Whale Fall - by Wjames - 05-11-2026, 11:22 AM
RE: Whale Fall - by RiverNotch - 05-11-2026, 05:15 PM



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