05-30-2026, 08:23 PM
"you weren’t there,
but your sister was."
threw me off a bit. not sure if adding the sister works.
"Time accrues. It wraps around
the throat and closes slow, until
one morning, you just don’t wake up.
And you’re the last to know. "
This is splendid. A poem in itself.
but your sister was."
threw me off a bit. not sure if adding the sister works.
"Time accrues. It wraps around
the throat and closes slow, until
one morning, you just don’t wake up.
And you’re the last to know. "
This is splendid. A poem in itself.