Unequal Contest - edit2
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(07-09-2026, 05:55 AM)milo Wrote:  At others
Catching talons
edit2;


A crow harassed a red-tailed hawk today,
black gestures twisting, flapping hard sometimes.
Crow tacked on escalator-steps of air
and struggled to gain place above, in front
of raptor which, gray swimmer in smooth sky,
responded lazily on banking wings.
Each time the striving crow had almost gained
position to attack, to stoop, to nip,
the heavy hawk – designed for lethal strikes-
extended, turning altitude to speed
and left the crow behind, a blowing chuff
of chaff not worth attacking but endowed
with wild ambition, laughter in the face
of unconcerned assurance, mortal grace.




@milo - You're right, those lines were unnecessary.  Sometimes I wonder why I write things like that... or leave them in.
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Messages In This Thread
Unequal Contest - edit2 - by dukealien - 07-04-2026, 11:24 PM
RE: Unequal Contest - by matsunosuperfan - 07-06-2026, 05:38 PM
RE: Unequal Contest - by busker - 07-06-2026, 06:23 PM
RE: Unequal Contest - edit - by dukealien - 07-09-2026, 04:59 AM
RE: Unequal Contest - edit - by milo - 07-09-2026, 05:55 AM
RE: Unequal Contest - edit - by dukealien - 07-09-2026, 09:35 AM
RE: Unequal Contest - edit - by matsunosuperfan - 07-11-2026, 08:07 AM



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