Doomed poetic love
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(08-19-2026, 07:29 PM)purplie Wrote:  The Haiku adored GPT, poor she
GPT answered back, I sha'n't, I can't
Haiku tried to reason, she tried, she died
Only 17 beats allowed, aloud

Solid work with rhyme and meter
the point, if there is one, is missing me

I don't understand what is keeping GPT and Haiku from having a lil fling
is the implication that 17 beats is too short? can GPT not count syllables? I feel lost as to what sense I am meant to bring to the song. But it's a nice song.
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Doomed poetic love - by purplie - 08-19-2026, 07:29 PM
RE: Doomed poetic love - by dukealien - Yesterday, 10:38 AM
RE: Doomed poetic love - by matsunosuperfan - Yesterday, 11:57 AM



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