08-29-2026, 10:51 PM
Really find your take on this piece of work insightful. I am new to this style of writting but even upon completion I felt something lacking. How to say a thing without being too direct and leaving sufficient desire for the reader to want to pursue is a new path for me to explore.
I will attempt another way ...thank you for your time
The second reply by matsuno highlighted my inexperience in structural forming when trying to carry a story.
I find your piece different but too formal for me but none the less its educational.
I shall attempt different paths and seeing a similar completed piece helps me when starting from scratch.
Thank you for your time
I will attempt another way ...thank you for your time
The second reply by matsuno highlighted my inexperience in structural forming when trying to carry a story.
I find your piece different but too formal for me but none the less its educational.
I shall attempt different paths and seeing a similar completed piece helps me when starting from scratch.
Thank you for your time