Die-Cut - edit

[matsunosuperfan]

I think the title "Die-Cut" is interesting enough but loses all strength when it is explained and then when the explanation ends up being - lives are like jig saw puzzles.  I honestly don't know if another human has ever written a poem saying the exact same thing but it feels easy - too easy - to the point I would be willing to bet my last farthing thre are at least a thousand.  So what is the solution?  Give up and move on?  Has humanity produced the last life is like a jig saw poem ever?  No, it just starts out a bit on the nose and then continues to be on the nose throughout.  The narrator is not living in their world so much as explaining a metaphor to the reader over and over.  It might be more interesting for the narrator to just describe the various situations of life being jig-saw-esque with the title and let the reader determine whether it is true or not.

Thanks for posting

great notes +1