Tampered Plates

[alonso ramoran]

The concept of the poem is to blend/compare flock cameras with the male gaze and how humans are similar in a surreal way that they become blended and indistinguishable. 

Was the flock camera metaphor not working? I think I have found I need a specific audience to understand the references.

I admire the concept and how the poem approaches it. I'll return later to give critique.