09-27-2026, 05:08 PM
I love this
I wish you’d posted it in Misc as I’m time poor atm
Even otherwise, I don’t feel the poem has enough scope for improvement. It’s a snapshot of a particular mood on a particular day, light hearted, nothing serious. Not much to dig into, which is fine.
I’d file it away as such.
I wish you’d posted it in Misc as I’m time poor atm
Even otherwise, I don’t feel the poem has enough scope for improvement. It’s a snapshot of a particular mood on a particular day, light hearted, nothing serious. Not much to dig into, which is fine.
I’d file it away as such.

