On Skydiving

[busker]

On Skydiving

Every day I wake up
feeling grateful
I’m not rich. …. mildly interesting setup 

because

this means I have no risk
of dying …. Clarifies the title 
just because

I’m bored … explains the first strophe 

Said no parkour athlete ever
There’s not much to critique in this. It’s a weakly argued opinion dressed up as a poem and that’s about it. Maybe that’s all it’s meant to be.

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On Skydiving

Every day I wake up
feeling grateful
I’m not rich. …. mildly interesting setup 

because

this means I have no risk
of dying …. Clarifies the title 
just because

I’m bored … explains the first strophe 

Said no parkour athlete ever
There’s not much to critique in this. It’s a weakly argued opinion dressed up as a poem and that’s about it. Maybe that’s all it’s meant to be.

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On Skydiving

Every day I wake up
feeling grateful
I’m not rich. …. mildly interesting setup 

because

this means I have no risk
of dying …. Clarifies the title 
just because

I’m bored … explains the first strophe 

Said no parkour athlete ever
There’s not much to critique in this. It’s a weakly argued opinion dressed up as a poem and that’s about it. Maybe that’s all it’s meant to be.