Sea, Swallow me

[sad_bunny]

Sea, swallow me

sea, swallow me
embrace me, hug me tight - here they both mean the same thing so it doesn't make sense to keep both
don't bring me back to the shore
this time
i'll forget how to swim

nonetheless i'll be choking
with the volume of the things  - instead of things you could say "words"
i never say
and crushed
by the weight of the things
i do not do - here you could say "i never did", which would follow better the line before and also extend on the feeling of regret and that heavy weight of something you could have done

I love this poem, there is an incredible deeper meaning that truly touches me. Here are some minor suggestions that in my opinion could heighten the emotions.