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about a real event
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Yesterday, 01:31 AM
(Yesterday, 12:42 AM)piscui Wrote: i like the overall concept of the poem, but as someone else said eternal night feels kind of overused, maybe shortening it to "eternity" has other effect?Thanks piscui. Courtesy of critique here it's already been changed and also accepted for publication.
"Whenever you see reference to a new paradigm you should always, under all circumstances, take cover" J. K. Galbraith, The Observer, 21 June 1998
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about a real event - by Luckieman - 09-21-2026, 08:24 PM
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RE: about a real event - by Luckieman - 09-21-2026, 09:57 PM
RE: about a real event - by wasellajam - 09-21-2026, 11:16 PM
RE: about a real event - by matsunosuperfan - 09-22-2026, 01:34 AM
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RE: about a real event - by matsunosuperfan - 09-22-2026, 01:51 AM
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RE: about a real event - by Luckieman - Yesterday, 01:31 AM
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