Natural language or don't bother

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https://rattle.com/katherine-with-the-la...-j-harris/

That poem could have its own discussion thread, imagine writing a poem about a shit poet you see regularly at the open mic you attend, reading it at the open mic to all the other poets after that shit poet dies, saying 'somene out there loved her, probably her mother' .  Does it work for me? Yes, does it sound like a journal entry? Yes, does it change my opinion about ancient norms improving your overall whim, no.  Thanks for the link though