Haiku (when I'm sad and heavy)

[matsunosuperfan]

Haiku

When I'm sad and heavy
rain falls in the street, I smile
watching my dog run

“Sad and heavy” is the sort of abstraction that is the opposite of haiku
Rain falls in the street
My dog runs:
I smile.

Would be closer to the spirit, though it too is horrible

thanks for reading. If I write more of these I will not share them here, probably. all the feedback has just been pedantry about what haiku traditionally do.