Today, 06:18 AM
(Today, 06:15 AM)hylas Wrote: Borzoimaybe "trots on" more active and better sound
Loping like a ghost along the wet black pavement,
the white dog is trotting on beside the gutter full
of moon-beams and blossom and delicate
orbs that are the images of skulls of mannequin
all leering like corpses from the sex-shop front.
same maybe for "mannequin skulls"
such an arresting image
great payoff at the end, enough weight accrued in the buildup that it doesn't feel like a cheap trick
yeah bravo