52 minutes ago
I like the thumbs gesture, but I think "hidden" introduces another layer of "puzzle" for the reader that makes the omage a bit too obscure perhaps (why is the speaker hiding their thumbs, one wonders)
Maybe instead just a hint of editorial, something like
your eyes dart back to your thumbsÂ
clenched in pockets against the worldÂ
or whatever
Maybe instead just a hint of editorial, something like
your eyes dart back to your thumbsÂ
clenched in pockets against the worldÂ
or whatever

