Borzoi

[robdaley]

Hi,

Borzoi

Loping like a ghost along the wet black pavement,
the white dog is trotting on
>I too thinks trots on would be better, or given the ghost, something like floats past, but different

beside the gutter full
of moon-beams and blossom and delicate
orbs 
>I would have the linebreak after orbs

that are the images of skulls of mannequin
all leering like corpses from the sex-shop front.

I liked this. Thanks for the read. Rob