Yesterday, 03:34 AM
Cheers. Did feel some heat coming from the second stanza. Maybe if you can let go of the riddle impulse the conceit can ultimately succeed. I think it's just a lot to ask at once:
-clock that this is a bicycle
-while also picking up on what the bike is saying
-and thus leave with a new understanding of their comments on respect and autonomy
noble aims, tough sell
-clock that this is a bicycle
-while also picking up on what the bike is saying
-and thus leave with a new understanding of their comments on respect and autonomy
noble aims, tough sell