11-09-2026, 06:32 AM
(11-07-2026, 07:20 PM)purplie Wrote:That's a great formal critique, I have been noticing myself using enjambment almost by default lately. Thanks for calling my attention to it(11-07-2026, 11:05 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote: MagicAnother riddle :-) This one I'm having a hard time decoding.
Walking through the park tonight, I feel like rotten milk
watching a pretty couple watch the stars
dance to their own music. It's winter cold
...
Many of the enjambments seem to be unmotivated.

