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thoughts[comment please]
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01-18-2010, 11:51 AM
It invokes something rather profound, but upon analyzing it, there seems to be something missing. How were your thoughts transcribed onto the ice? Being a watery grave, one would think first of a Viking funeral perhaps. Or better yet, it being "watery" as in transparent, fluid-like. Two ideas seem to be in opposition now. How about icy grave? frozen grave? tombcicles? But yeah, for only using seven words, this is quite good.
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thoughts[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-09-2010, 12:35 PM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by billy - 01-09-2010, 03:05 PM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-09-2010, 03:46 PM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by billy - 01-09-2010, 04:08 PM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by addy - 01-11-2010, 04:11 PM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-11-2010, 06:36 PM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by mikebauer - 01-12-2010, 05:52 AM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by NadCloutier - 01-18-2010, 11:51 AM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-18-2010, 12:13 PM
RE: thoughts[comment please] - by NadCloutier - 01-19-2010, 11:47 AM
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