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Are you alluding to me?

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06-29-2010, 08:40 PM

can see more than one blade so
how about

A few blades of grass.

i really like it Wink

Wink

love the last line.

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perspective[comment please[ - by srijantje - 06-29-2010, 08:22 PM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by billy - 06-29-2010, 08:40 PM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by srijantje - 06-29-2010, 08:52 PM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by billy - 06-30-2010, 06:30 AM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by addy - 07-01-2010, 08:03 AM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by srijantje - 07-01-2010, 10:15 AM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by Bianca Alabaster - 08-11-2010, 09:54 AM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by srijantje - 12-09-2010, 11:14 AM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by heslopian - 12-09-2010, 12:15 PM

RE: perspective[comment please[ - by srijantje - 12-09-2010, 12:37 PM

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