Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots

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Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots

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01-20-2010, 10:48 PM

i liked the second part a lot,i cannot give critique since i don't know anything about poetry

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Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots - by NadCloutier - 01-20-2010, 08:37 AM

RE: Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots - by billy - 01-20-2010, 09:24 AM

RE: Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots - by NadCloutier - 01-20-2010, 10:24 PM

RE: Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots - by billy - 01-21-2010, 09:12 AM

RE: Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots - by srijantje - 01-20-2010, 10:48 PM

RE: Between Shifts; Coffee, Cigarettes, and Parking Lots - by addy - 01-21-2010, 09:49 AM

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