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09-03-2010, 11:13 AM

i like the poem but there's a small but!

at first i got the impression of being one with the mass.
the it changed and i felt the opposite. it left me a little confused

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Heaven - by addy - 08-26-2010, 11:43 AM

RE: Heaven - by billy - 09-03-2010, 11:13 AM

RE: Heaven - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-06-2010, 09:38 AM

RE: Heaven - by addy - 09-06-2010, 10:35 AM

RE: Heaven - by Bianca Alabaster - 09-06-2010, 12:20 PM

RE: Heaven - by addy - 09-10-2010, 08:34 PM

RE: Heaven - by heslopian - 10-03-2010, 12:27 PM

RE: Heaven - by addy - 10-03-2010, 03:34 PM

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