10-11-2010, 09:57 PM
The first one reminds me of a famous haiku which I read today, whilst browsing my college library. Nice little image, well related. Not much more I can say really.
The second is my favourite; though, without the seasonal word or nature reference, isn't it more of a senryu? Nonetheless, it's witty and clever. Though "it's," being as it is a possessive term, shouldn't have an apostrophe.
The second is my favourite; though, without the seasonal word or nature reference, isn't it more of a senryu? Nonetheless, it's witty and clever. Though "it's," being as it is a possessive term, shouldn't have an apostrophe.