10-26-2010, 01:16 PM 
	
	
	
		One of my first poems. The rhythme needs to be worked on, but I installed many symbols I would like to know what i should change and also if you can spot the symbols.
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| Memories and Dreams - by meanbubbles - 10-26-2010, 01:16 PM RE: Memories and Dreams - by addy - 10-26-2010, 04:49 PM RE: Memories and Dreams - by meanbubbles - 10-26-2010, 05:03 PM RE: Memories and Dreams - by billy - 10-26-2010, 05:16 PM RE: Memories and Dreams - by meanbubbles - 10-26-2010, 08:47 PM RE: Memories and Dreams - by billy - 10-26-2010, 09:05 PM RE: Memories and Dreams - by Todd - 10-27-2010, 12:11 AM RE: Memories and Dreams - by Todd - 10-27-2010, 04:00 AM RE: Memories and Dreams - by meanbubbles - 10-27-2010, 04:58 PM |