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~That Last Kiss~

ficosdarkness

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10-30-2010, 02:49 AM

(10-29-2010, 06:26 PM)billy Wrote: it feels better fd.
it flows well though the end of;
too high right now, I simply can't focus and always for more I will yearn.
feels forced.

it was,Billy. You've come to know me well.

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~That Last Kiss~ - by ficosdarkness - 10-29-2010, 07:20 AM

RE: ~That Last Kiss~ - by billy - 10-29-2010, 08:31 AM

RE: ~That Last Kiss~ - by ficosdarkness - 10-29-2010, 09:08 AM

RE: ~That Last Kiss~ - by billy - 10-29-2010, 06:26 PM

RE: ~That Last Kiss~ - by ficosdarkness - 10-30-2010, 02:49 AM

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