~It's Just That Simple~ Revised Version

[ficosdarkness]

Thanks for posting this... simple but passionate. Agree that there are quite a few filler words you won't miss deleting ("the cause and it's effect" could be just "the cause and effect", for instance)

Also, just imo. I felt that the second to last stanza would've been a stronger finish to the poem than the actual last stanza (at least those last few lines)

Again, thanks for the read

Thank you, Addy! You've been a great help to me! I'm still a work in progress, hoping that I have it in me to become complete.