02-02-2011, 11:20 AM
I confess i don't quite get the title as well... 
Like the poem itself, though. The only thing I wasn't fond of was "frost" and "frozen" put so close together since it made the adjective sound like a needless repetition... maybe another word that has similar meaning can be substituted. But overall very nice, and a quirky, unexpected ending to boot.
Thanks for the post
Like the poem itself, though. The only thing I wasn't fond of was "frost" and "frozen" put so close together since it made the adjective sound like a needless repetition... maybe another word that has similar meaning can be substituted. But overall very nice, and a quirky, unexpected ending to boot.
Thanks for the post
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?