(content warning) I Forget His Name (or "The Shallowness of Youth")

(content warning) I Forget His Name (or "The Shallowness of Youth")

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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02-20-2011, 10:47 AM

hehe, the 2nd verse was just so.
the 3rd was the same, even more so.

in the 4th is 'a' needed before 'pleasant'?

for me it was delightful read jack.

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(content warning) I Forget His Name (or "The Shallowness of Youth") - by heslopian - 02-19-2011, 08:53 AM

RE: (content warning) I Forget His Name (or "The Shallowness of Youth") - by billy - 02-20-2011, 10:47 AM

RE: (content warning) I Forget His Name (or "The Shallowness of Youth") - by heslopian - 02-20-2011, 10:52 AM

RE: (content warning) I Forget His Name (or "The Shallowness of Youth") - by addy - 02-25-2011, 01:36 PM

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