"Madness."

[billy]

I make my dry
Wooden thoughts
Alive.
Then I cremate them
Alive. is this line needed?
With ash I fertilize
My scanty mind.
Once it yields
Something
Alive.
And it cremates me. is 'and' needed?
Alive.

for me there's only enough room for two 'alives. in the poem.
i like the way you use renewal as an interpretation
for the imagination. how when we do think of something it burns us up then it dies and we think of something else.
thanks for the read RY