02-26-2011, 01:47 PM
pretty powerful. will give it a workout during next week jack as it's a long pice.
i will say i think you could have used less commas in places and began sentences sooner in order let the reader take in the words.
i think you have a knack for the prose jack.
i will say i think you could have used less commas in places and began sentences sooner in order let the reader take in the words.
i think you have a knack for the prose jack.