03-24-2011, 02:17 PM
That's a hell of a brave edit, and it worked beautifully. It worked exactly like a painting: quietly shocking, no affectation or explanation to distract as it stares straight at you (the reader).
I am loving your readings.
I am loving your readings.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
